Moriah Leila

Hmm, I'm not sure if I would classify this as poetry, even though it contains quite a bit of poetry. It feels more like a short story to me. Especially ...

I agree that this is a very short poem and therefore difficult to find anything to critisize or to praise. I do like your description of the sky. I love ...

I totally agree with thedelphinater in that this poem lacked any real emotion. I totally get what you're trying to say and I can say that I relate. I wanted ...

Hey there! I really enjoyed this poem. It is so true, we can do nothing to stop time from passing. I don't think we are really victims of time, if ...

I can understand why this style of poetry could be your least favorite, as it is extremely redundant and I am almost pulled my hair out, just reading it. However, ...

I wish you had described more of the game in this poem. How does it smell, taste, sound, feel, and look like? What game are you playing? If it were ...

I agree with stuffkatiewrites that some of the phrases you used took this poem from being poetry to being a conversation. While I think you do a good job of ...

I must say that I was very impressed with this poem. (I gave you a star!) There were so many instances where I was like, "Wow!" I really enjoyed reading ...

Hey there, I liked this poem, it was very festive! Definitely brings back memories when I was a child and how difficult it was to fall asleep on Christmas Eve. ...

Hey there, great poem! I really liked how you talk about absorbing the music. Sometimes I do that, when I am listening to a great song. This poem really spoke ...

I think you should probably write when you are more rested. Wow, that came out a lot meaner than I meant. What I mean is that, you are obviously a ...

I really enjoyed this. I liked how you pointed out that beauty is superficial and that you will never be pleased with something so fickle. I thought you wrote this ...

Wow, this poem basically disgusted me. I am sure that was what you were going for, and you did a good job. I have a hard time giving you criticism ...

This poem was interesting to read. I liked how you made the angel out to be both fierce but also kind. Some of your lines were quite brilliant (runs with ...

I thought this was a good poem. It gave me a great insight into who you are as a person. As I pointed out before, punctuate your poems just like ...